HOW WOULD YOU

CHANGE THE WORLD?

Tell us how you would change the world in 500 words or less for a chance to win cash prizes!

1st Place
$1,500

2nd Place
$750

3rd Place
$500

8 pictures showing people involved in different humanitarian projects around the world

HOW TO ENTER

  1. Write a short personal essay answering the question: “How would you change the world?” For more guidance on what to write, see below. Final submissions MUST be no more than 500 words. 

  2. Submit your essay right here by 11:59 PM on Wednesday 27 September. Be sure to fill out each section. (You must be a currently enrolled 18+ BYU student to enter).

  3. Submissions will go through an initial review process and 6 finalists will be chosen. Judges will review the six finalists using the rubric below to determine the final scores. Tuesday 3 October the top three cash prize winners will be announced.

  • Submissions Open - Monday 28 August 2023

    Writing Submissions Due - 11:59 pm on Wednesday 27 September 2023

    Winners Announced - Tuesday 3 October 2023

  • Here are some questions to help guide your personal essay:
    How do you want to help?

    Who do you want to help?

    Where do you want to help?

    What is your personal connection to the issue?

    Examples:
    You want to become a lawyer to advocate for mental healthcare for low-income families in the United States, because you experienced debilitating anorexia and had an expensive life-saving intervention that would not have been possible without your family’s extensive resources. (Read Sophie’s story here)


    An early battle with clinical depression instilled within you a powerful sense of empathy that has propelled you to find solutions for others struggling. You want to find innovative solutions that use education to help youth struggling with mental illness in the United States. (Read Sarah’s story here)


    You first studied nursing because your life was changed because of your parents’ access to quality health insurance. Now, you want to find ways to improve the healthcare system to help deserving individuals across the global community receive access to those same health services. (Read Harper’s story here)

  • Once the six finalists are chosen, the top three winners are selected based on:
    1) a final score from a review board of judges.


    The review board’s grade will be worth 100% of your final score, based on the following criteria:


    Through Line - Include a central theme that permeates the entire story from beginning to end.


    Succinct Messaging - Keep it short but cover what you need to. Final drafts MUST be less than 500 words.


    Show Don’t Tell - Bring the reader into the experience by sharing stories, illustrative words, and examples.


    Emotions, Enthusiasm, & Vulnerability - Use writing strategies that enhance a reader's connection to the story.


    Impact - Help us understand the positive impact your idea will have on the world.

  • Who can participate?
    This contest is open to all currently enrolled BYU students who are 18 years or older.

    Where do I submit my idea?
    Submit via this link: https://byu.az1.qualtrics.com/jfe/form/SV_e4bQWTxYrOBBgKW

    When is the deadline to submit?
    The deadline to submit your short story is Wednesday 27 September at 11:59 PM.

    How is my story used?
    Finalists' stories will be published on this Changemaker website. Stories may also be used in the future for Ballard Center articles, social media posts, newsletters, student highlights, and more.

    Why should I submit a Changemaker story?
    By submitting just 500 words, each student has the opportunity to earn between $500 and $1500. Additionally, the Ballard Center is full of resources to help students make a big impact. By sharing your idea with us, we can help you make your dreams of becoming a Changemaker a reality.

    I’m not sure if my idea is big/innovative enough. Should I still submit it?
    Absolutely! Here at the Ballard Center, we know that ideas don’t have to be big and flashy to make a real impact. Your story is unique to you, and we want to hear whatever passion to make a difference has come from that.

    I have a vague idea but need help solidifying it. Can I receive any help or coaching?
    The Ballard Center offers free advisement to all students. Schedule an appointment at https://marriott.byu.edu/ballard/students/schedule-advisement/ or feel free to stop by TNRB 360 between 8 a.m. and 5 p.m. any weekday to talk with someone about your ideas to make a difference!

    Does my story have to be exactly 500 words long?
    No. Less than 500 words is acceptable, but stories with more than 500 words will not be accepted.

    Can I submit my essay late?
    No, the submission date is firm.

  • • Participation is open only to currently enrolled BYU students (undergraduate and graduate)

    • Each participant will be added to the Ballard Center Newsletter

    • Submission cannot extend 500 words

    • One entry allowed per student

    • Participants must be 18 years and older

    • Essay must be submitted by Wednesday 11 October 2023, at 11:59 pm

    • Submission must be original work

    By submitting your idea, if it is chosen to be published, you give the BYU Ballard Social Impact Center the rights to display your essay on the Ballard Center website and social media platforms. In addition, the Ballard Center may use the project title and the author’s name and personal image as part of the Ballard Center’s future promotional efforts.

    You acknowledge that your submission must be your original work and must not infringe upon the copyrights, trademarks, rights of privacy, publicity, or other intellectual property or other rights of any person or entity. The Ballard Center may, in its sole discretion, disqualify submissions for privacy or intellectual property infringements. The Ballard Center reserves the right to use or not use submissions.

    You assume all risk of participation and acknowledge and agree that neither BYU nor the Ballard Center shall be liable for any damages, injuries, claims, causes of actions, or losses of any kind or nature resulting from participation in this competition.

    The Ballard Center reserves the right to interpret these official rules and administer the competition as appropriate and its decisions are final. This agreement will supersede any and all other agreements, oral or written, or any other understanding. scription

WRITING CHALLENGE

Congratulations to our 2022 Winners!

Thank you to everyone that submitted to this year's Changemaker Writing Challenge! We had a total of 199 submissions. We have loved reading through all of your incredible ideas and wish that each one of you could be a winner, but unfortunately, we are not made of endless money so 3 winners will need to be chosen.

Even if you were not selected as one of our finalists, we hope that you will continue to develop your ideas and work towards changing the world for the better, and that you come to the Ballard Social Impact Center to access all of the wonderful resources we have available to help make your idea a reality.

First Place: Monica Bertha, “Art Changes Hearts”

1st place winner from changemakers 2022, Monica Bertha, holding a check for $1,500

Second Place: Elisha Freitas, “Writing Myself Into the Narrative”

2nd place winner from changemakers 2022, Elisha Freitas, holding a check for $750

Third Place: Kate Lindsay, “A Voice for Refugees”

3rd place winner from changemakers 2022, Kate Lindsay, holding a check for $500

2022 Writing Challenge Finalist Stories